Final Presentation feedback

• Spelling- a lot of spelling errors
• Light hearted, easy to read
• Nice hippos
• Like the stock and illustrations
• Would be nice to see white as a third colour, screen printing
• Made me laugh
• The title was confusing- no indication of what was inside, what do hippos have to do with lying
• Appropriate to target audience
• Like the intriguing outline of the hippo on the envelope
• Website and book work really nicely with the concept
• Problem of teachers/ government finding out