Sunday, 28 March 2010

Final Presentation feedback

  • Spelling- a lot of spelling errors
  • Light hearted, easy to read
  • Nice hippos
  • Like the stock and illustrations
  • Would be nice to see white as a third colour, screen printing
  • Made me laugh
  • The title was confusing- no indication of what was inside, what do hippos have to do with lying
  • Appropriate to target audience
  • Like the intriguing outline of the hippo on the envelope
  • Website and book work really nicely with the concept
  • Problem of teachers/ government finding out

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