Speaking from experience- Progress Crit

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• Lots of research on type
• Need more research on packaging-look at more styles
• Could look into different stock and practise with them
• Developed work well, although designs have been manipulated they still look hand drawn and have a personal touch.
• Need more research in general, where are the quotes from?
• Quotes and products perfect for the considered audience.
• Perhaps a blank postcard you send home which they could send back.
• Research- artists, inspiration